She Never Gave Up On Others
Even When Others Gave Up On Her
I chose this sentence because I thought that it represented me because sometimes people give up on me when they don't think that I am capable of doing something when I am, but I don't give up on other people, even when I know that they are not capable of doing something. When people give up on me, it makes me feel like I am not capable of doing anything, But when I don't give up on someone, it makes me feel like I am a helpful person and I am cable of doing anything. One time I was in a swimming camp in the summer, and we where having race, but the twist to the race was that 2 people had to swim while pushing another person on a floating mat. I was the person who the other 2 people where pushing and in the middle of the race, I fell off. So the other 2 people gave up on me and decided to put different person o the mat. We lost the race because they decided to give up on me and put different person on the mat. That is another example of how this sentence it true. I did no give up on them because I helped push the other person on the mat, and they gave up on me because they decided to put the other person on the mat because I fell off. That is how this sentence represents me.
Wow Amber! I think this post will be very inspiring for others to read. Even though others sometimes let you down, you keep on trying your best and continue to support others. Your voice really shines through because of the specific examples you provided and the feelings your included.
ReplyDeleteI found that you used some words often (eg. person) - try to vary your word choice.
Well done!