Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Busy Signal

After I read that article, I made a decision that I am agreeing with the teachers and staff of the school. I agree with them, because if students have their phones out during class time, they will get distracted by their phones. For example, if a student is on their phone during a very important lesson, they could miss something that could count for part of their grade. I don't think that students would want to miss something important for their work. I know that I wouldn't want to miss something because if  miss something, I would get bad grades and have a really bad school year. If you are on your phone all class and you miss something, it could be that one really big thing that you need to know for the test. 

If banning phones from the school can help with students learning, I think that all schools should ban phones for the benefits of kids learning. I know that some students would disagree with this, but if you have your cell phone out 24/7, it could interfere with your learning and your grades. So if students want to put their grades in danger by playing on their phones all day they can, but if they want to stay focused on school and keep their grades good, they should put their phones down and stay focused on the real world more then their own little phone world. In the article it quotes " Students are focusing more on learning, instead of who's texting them or sending them a snap chat". "This means that since phones are banned from the school, students can focus more on what important then their phone world".

 Just think about it, if your students are all on their phones all day, you have no reason to be there because nobody is listening to you and you have no purpose. So I think that students should put the phones down and focus more on life than the phone life. So that is what I think about the idea of banning phones from all schools.
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